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Eternally yours
Eternity!
You're going where
I cannot come, so
Take good care!
How lonely will
Your journey be?
My Love, beware!
The path you choose
Is for but souls pure,
So I loose
Whatever right
To take you there!
Tormenting me:
The memory
Of what has passed
And what should be!
Curse, not bless -
Eternity!
Eternity!
You're going where
I cannot come, so
Take good care!
How lonely will
Your journey be?
My Love, beware!
The path you choose
Is for but souls pure,
So I loose
Whatever right
To take you there!
Tormenting me:
The memory
Of what has passed
And what should be!
Curse, not bless -
Eternity!
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I like how this is written; starts with a quick pacing strut, then pauses just at that moment to for you to catch up -- then once more moves gradually to a steady flow of the words
And if I were to take the message quite literally, it would quite a lonely path for me to seek, with all the regrets that I could face eventually
Well done
And if I were to take the message quite literally, it would quite a lonely path for me to seek, with all the regrets that I could face eventually
Well done